I am liking it so far but there are a few things which i didn’t like. At some places the female protagonist asking for permission from male, but then given the timeline it makes sense. It bothered me. But otherwise i will recommend it. :))
I know it's your personal writing, and you can remove it whenever you want to, but I think you can leave this one here if you'd like. It's a nice post. There's something about it that feels anchored, as if it belongs exactly where it is.
Thank you for reading it. 🫶 I read it again and realised it has spelling mistakes and also grammar 😭 but now i don’t want to correct them. Still haven’t decided if i keep or archive. Maybe i will leave it, and move on. :)) atleast i will be able to move on from something 😆🙈
I am not looking at it through a lens, so the flaws don’t really matter to me. Sometimes the emotion matters more than perfect grammar. This felt raw and honest, and I think that’s what makes it good. Or maybe just human.
“The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ, Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line, Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.”
trust me i resonated with every line about love and guess what? i had ordered gunaho ka devta to gift someone and flipcart just delivered it haha. loved it.
I’m a survivor that has been trying to find other survivors. I survived the 90’s era.
https://butterflydreamlab.substack.com/p/the-clinic
I can't say I relate to this personally, but the way you've described memory and association is really compelling and beautiful!
Will you recommend Gunaho k Devta ?
Thank you for reading 🫶🫶
I am liking it so far but there are a few things which i didn’t like. At some places the female protagonist asking for permission from male, but then given the timeline it makes sense. It bothered me. But otherwise i will recommend it. :))
Impermanence, impermanence and impermanence. 🩷 love and hate relationship. Loved reading this, Varnika 🩷🩷
Thank you for reading my rant 🫶🫶
I know it's your personal writing, and you can remove it whenever you want to, but I think you can leave this one here if you'd like. It's a nice post. There's something about it that feels anchored, as if it belongs exactly where it is.
Thank you for reading it. 🫶 I read it again and realised it has spelling mistakes and also grammar 😭 but now i don’t want to correct them. Still haven’t decided if i keep or archive. Maybe i will leave it, and move on. :)) atleast i will be able to move on from something 😆🙈
I am not looking at it through a lens, so the flaws don’t really matter to me. Sometimes the emotion matters more than perfect grammar. This felt raw and honest, and I think that’s what makes it good. Or maybe just human.
“The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ, Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line, Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.”
- Omar khayyam
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trust me i resonated with every line about love and guess what? i had ordered gunaho ka devta to gift someone and flipcart just delivered it haha. loved it.
Thank you reading my rant 🙈
Are we living in some alternate reality where same things are happening and we don’t know 😭
I am blessed hehe.
Yes perhaps😭